Conclusion
The Adventure of 4 has finally come to an end. I and my friends had lots of fun creating this story. Each of us writing each chapter. It's a story where all of our creative minds came together. Our form teacher accidently saw us looking at the book. She asked whether she could look at the book. With no choice, we gave her the book praying she wouldn't read chapter 2 onwards as the guys names were inside. Thank god, she didnt. She had just flipped through. She praised us and told our class about our book. We felt happy...but then our classmates all started asking to see our book. Overall, it was a great experience for us. Now we are in different classes and we do not know if we would ever continue writing the book. But we hope whoever who has read this story through this blog or through the book had enjoyed it.
PS: By the way, if you are confused by the word 'book'. It's not a book where we had published and put in the library. It's just we stapeld A4 papers together. And i drew the pictures at the front inside and out and coloured it. You can see the cover of the book at the bottomost part of this page. Sorry if it's blur.
Sunday, May 27, 2007
Chapter 6: The Ending
The atmosphere was crowded, busy and packed. It was Changi Hospital. People were running around like crazy trying to get everything in order. Firdaus, Nisa and Nadera waited anxiously with Baihakki and Zahira. Finally, the doctor came out. The three stood up so fast that the doctor got shocked. "Woah! Don't worry! Deborah is fine. Legolas is now having a blood transfusion (Nisa gasped). But that is nothing to worry about. It is just giving blood to him as he has lost so much...". Nisa started walking towards the room Legolas was in and went in. The doctor looked puzzled, but continued. "Vikram, however, is going through a surgery (Nadera's eyes opened wide) because we found poison in his wound which must have been on the knife. It's a green substance called 'graseles' (Nadera broke down and sat on the chair, crying) and we are now cleaning his blood"...he looked at Nadera straight into her eyes and said,"Don't worry. he will be just fine". At that moment, a nurse came out from the room Legolas was in and whispered something to the doctor. The doctor smiled and said to Nadera,"Will you follow me?". Nadera obeyed and followed the doctor. So now, Baihakki and Zahira were all alone, as Firdaus had gone to see Deborah. Then suddenly, Zahira started crying.
"What's wrong?" Baihakki asked. "I'm so glad that we are all alright", Zahira replied. "Tears of joy huh?", Firdaus said, walking towards them with Deborah in his arms. While waiting for the rest, Firdaus said to Deborah,"Thanks for saving me. I did not think you would actually come for me. You even brought my friends (also known as boyfriends)". "Ofcourse i would come! I would do anything for you. But i didn't expect it to be Ghazali. I thought he didn't like me...haha, but we got a big surprise!", Deborah replied. Soon, Nisa and Nadera walked towards them with Vikram and Legolas. Nisa and Nadera were looking very happy. "Why are you smiling so cheekly?", Zahira asked. Nadera looked quite weak and tired so Nisa replied,"Well, as both were needing blood, we decided to donate ours to them. So now, Legolas has my blood and Vikram has Nadera's. Nadera looks weak as Vikram needed more blood.". Then, all of them went out together. They couldn't wait to talk to Ghazali about it when they all went back to school. Each couple had a stronger relationship now. "Your experience in these things helped us also Legolas", Deborah commented. Legolas smiled. Nisa was very proud of him. Everyone was proud and greatful for each other.
Finally, the day came when all their parents returned from KL. The whole gang were at Firdaus' house watching a movie. The doorbell rang and Firdaus answered it. "Oh hi mum and dad! How was your trip?". They told all of them about their trip; the things they saw, the food they ate, the places they went to and other details. "What did you all do for the holidays?" they asked them. They were all stunned. "Watch TV and simple stuff", Firdaus replied quickly. This wasn't true, but they decided to keep it a secret. It was something that would be kept between the eight of them. This was an adventure none of them would ever forget. "What are those injuries??!!", they exclaimed, pointing to Legolas and Vikram. "Soccer", Firdaus replied quickly again. "So rough!" they commented and went into the kitchen. They were all so relieved. Just then, Zahira got an sms. It said,"Help!HELP!!! I've been captured! They are going to toture me! Come quickly to Naboo, Tatooine Desert". They all sat there, shocked. It was from their classmate, Shafiq. Then, they all grinned at each other, with a cheeky smile. "Why bother?", they said in unison. He was a naughty boy anymore. BUT, will they? Well, the truth lies in them. If they would save him, then YOU must wait for the next edition of The Adventure of 4. Till then, we wish the gang happy holidays!!
The atmosphere was crowded, busy and packed. It was Changi Hospital. People were running around like crazy trying to get everything in order. Firdaus, Nisa and Nadera waited anxiously with Baihakki and Zahira. Finally, the doctor came out. The three stood up so fast that the doctor got shocked. "Woah! Don't worry! Deborah is fine. Legolas is now having a blood transfusion (Nisa gasped). But that is nothing to worry about. It is just giving blood to him as he has lost so much...". Nisa started walking towards the room Legolas was in and went in. The doctor looked puzzled, but continued. "Vikram, however, is going through a surgery (Nadera's eyes opened wide) because we found poison in his wound which must have been on the knife. It's a green substance called 'graseles' (Nadera broke down and sat on the chair, crying) and we are now cleaning his blood"...he looked at Nadera straight into her eyes and said,"Don't worry. he will be just fine". At that moment, a nurse came out from the room Legolas was in and whispered something to the doctor. The doctor smiled and said to Nadera,"Will you follow me?". Nadera obeyed and followed the doctor. So now, Baihakki and Zahira were all alone, as Firdaus had gone to see Deborah. Then suddenly, Zahira started crying.
"What's wrong?" Baihakki asked. "I'm so glad that we are all alright", Zahira replied. "Tears of joy huh?", Firdaus said, walking towards them with Deborah in his arms. While waiting for the rest, Firdaus said to Deborah,"Thanks for saving me. I did not think you would actually come for me. You even brought my friends (also known as boyfriends)". "Ofcourse i would come! I would do anything for you. But i didn't expect it to be Ghazali. I thought he didn't like me...haha, but we got a big surprise!", Deborah replied. Soon, Nisa and Nadera walked towards them with Vikram and Legolas. Nisa and Nadera were looking very happy. "Why are you smiling so cheekly?", Zahira asked. Nadera looked quite weak and tired so Nisa replied,"Well, as both were needing blood, we decided to donate ours to them. So now, Legolas has my blood and Vikram has Nadera's. Nadera looks weak as Vikram needed more blood.". Then, all of them went out together. They couldn't wait to talk to Ghazali about it when they all went back to school. Each couple had a stronger relationship now. "Your experience in these things helped us also Legolas", Deborah commented. Legolas smiled. Nisa was very proud of him. Everyone was proud and greatful for each other.
Finally, the day came when all their parents returned from KL. The whole gang were at Firdaus' house watching a movie. The doorbell rang and Firdaus answered it. "Oh hi mum and dad! How was your trip?". They told all of them about their trip; the things they saw, the food they ate, the places they went to and other details. "What did you all do for the holidays?" they asked them. They were all stunned. "Watch TV and simple stuff", Firdaus replied quickly. This wasn't true, but they decided to keep it a secret. It was something that would be kept between the eight of them. This was an adventure none of them would ever forget. "What are those injuries??!!", they exclaimed, pointing to Legolas and Vikram. "Soccer", Firdaus replied quickly again. "So rough!" they commented and went into the kitchen. They were all so relieved. Just then, Zahira got an sms. It said,"Help!HELP!!! I've been captured! They are going to toture me! Come quickly to Naboo, Tatooine Desert". They all sat there, shocked. It was from their classmate, Shafiq. Then, they all grinned at each other, with a cheeky smile. "Why bother?", they said in unison. He was a naughty boy anymore. BUT, will they? Well, the truth lies in them. If they would save him, then YOU must wait for the next edition of The Adventure of 4. Till then, we wish the gang happy holidays!!
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